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Newsletter of The North American School of Outdoor Writing

Newsletter of the North American School of Outdoor Writing

 "ROGER BRUNT" Subject : Re: reduction in tuition cost for the North American  of Outdoor Writing Greetings from Salt Spring Island on a beautiful spring day.

 Just a reminder that the cost of tuition for North America's only Outdoor Writing Course, normally $999, remains at $888 for *two more weeks only *April 30 2007. If you are interested in this very special offer, please let me know so I can hold a spot for you. All the best, Roger Brunt Founder


 

Dec. 2006

Storm after storm has been sweeping in off the Pacific.  Fortunately, most do not bring snow, just lots of wind and rain.  We call these storms The Pineapple Express because they come all the way from Hawaii—now, right at the shortest day of the year in all this rain and gloom, Hawaii’s sunshine doesn’t sound so bad.

 

Please welcome new students Jessi Bell in Terrace, B.C. and Susan Arbouw, in Thunder Bay, Ontario.  I look forward to working with both these writers, and getting to know them through their writing.

 

Thank you to Kevin Rhoades, Executive Director of Outdoor Writers of America.   Kevin sent me a copy of OWAA’s Outdoor Reference Manual, a glossary of every outdoor term a writer is likely to encounter.  Kevin also mentioned I have been a member of OWAA fir 17 years—wow!—seems like yesterday…

 

Congratulations to student Kent Dickens in Livingston, Texas.  Kent has been accepted for membership in OWAA--smart move, Kent.  Very smart move!

 

FREE MONEY FOR PUBLSIHED FREELANCERS

A REMINDER FROM GRADUATE STUDENT (2000) JUSTIN HOFFMAN

Hey Roger,

 Greetings my friend! Just wanted to say - another great newsletter read. Really enjoy getting these, and they are tremedously helpful, even to a graduate student.

The writing and photography business is still going well. Enjoying my Field Editor position with Ontario Out of Doorss, which has brought on many new adventures, as well as great friendships. Currently Pro Staffing for two companies, namely HT Enterprises (ice fishing) and most recently Fin-tech (lure manufacturer).  These two companies are leading to bigger and better things and I am optimistic that the future looks bright.

I wanted to send a personal thank you in regards to Access Copyright.  In a previous newsletter from "way back," you had mentioned the importance of signing up for this free service. I did so two or so years ago, and religiously documented my publication credits. Never heard anything back, other than an information e-mail every couple of months. It was with great surprise, however, that I opened up the mail today to find a cheque for $467.53!  This is my portion of the yearly payment that is shared between 6866 creator affiliates.  Like everyone, receiving cash in the mail certainly starts the day off right!

Might be worthwhile to make mention of this program to your students again. It will take two years to receive your first payment, but it does in fact come, just like you had stated.

Congrats again on the course, Roger. It has certainly opened the door for me in so many ways...

 All the best,

 Justin Hoffman

 

TIP FOR ALL FREELANCERS

 

In the Writers Guidelines for Birders World magazine, there is a good bit of advice we can all heed.

It says: The worst queries we read come from writers who think only about what they want to say. The best come from writers who give thought to what our readers want to read.  The editors go on to say:  “We’re a family business and we consider our readership our Family of Subscribers.  Furthermore, we consider our contributing writers a part of our family, too.  We look forward to hearing from you!”  …a very nice touch…

 

Kentucky Graduate student Charles Smick continues to thunder his way towards a very successful career as a part-time freelance writer.  Writes Charles:

Hi Roger:

 I thought I would drop you a note and say "Hi". I have been very busy with writing articles and photography shoots, both for articles and straight photography work.

 I sold 34 articles this year, and several articles have been accepted for publication in a variety of magazines for next year. I sold my first article to a national magazine this year, BUCKMASTERS Whitetail Magazine. They have accepted another article and photos for publication next year. I currently have three articles into national magazines and I am writing for seven regional and state publications at this time also.

 I am still working on completing the professional photography course through the New York Institute of Photography. It's a great course, and a good follow-on course to your outdoor writing course.

 Thank you again for helping me make a dream come true!!!

 Best Wishes to you and your family for a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

 Your Friend and well-satisfied student,

 Chuck Smick

 

From Montana writer-photographer graduate student Hobie Hare is busy helping out the Outdoor Writers Association of America find judges for the writing contest.  He writes

Hi Roger,
Hope this finds you well, and getting ready for the holiday season.
I wanted to know if you could help get the word out that volunteer judges are needed to serve in the Camping/Backpacking contest for OWAA (Outdoor Writers Association of America). You do not have to be a member of the organization to judge, and it would be great to get some non-members' perspectives on the quality of the published work that members are putting out these days.
Could you run this request in your next newsletter, or alternatively, send it out to potentially interested parties? I am especially in need of persons who would feel experienced and qualified to evaluate submissions for the TV/Video and Radio sections.
If you know of anyone who might be willing to serve as a judge in any of the categories below, feel free to have them contact me and to put something about wanting to judge in the header in their e-mail to me. Thanks!
 I am looking for judges to serve in the following sections: Newspaper Section ( 3 judges needed), Magazine (3 needed), Newspaper Outdoor Page (3 needed), Art/Photo (4-5 needed), TV/Video (3), and Radio (3).
Interested? The time frame and commitment would be that you would receive copies of submissions to read and score the second week of February, and they would need to be received by yours truly by March 8. You would be reimbursed for any mailing expenses, and your other reward would be a hearty thanks from someone who volunteered to coordinate the judging for all five of the above contests, plus some very excellent karma.  If you are able to  help judge, please also let me know your current contact info and mailing address.
Thanks again, Roger, for any assistance you can provide, and have a great holiday season and New Year.
All the best,
Hobie
Photographer and Writer
www.wildharephotos.com

P.O. Box 371
Bozeman, MT 59771


 

Grammar Grappler

In a recent column I wrote I was confronted with this dilemma:

Should I write:

At Cape Beale Light, there IS the remains of a fence that was erected…

Or

At Cape Beale Light, there ARE the remains of a fence that was erected…

 

Our Grammar Grappler Pennsylvanian John Swinton advises

Roger. You probably want the short answer, which is "the remains are" ("there" is not a subject).  The longer and better answer harkens back to my bias against the false subjects "there are" and "there is."  They reveal, first, a writer reluctant to get underway; second, a writer unwilling to find a lively active verb; and third, a writer liable to commit a grammatical error.  Merry Christmas, if that's appropriate, and all the best for a Happy and Serene New Year.  John

More Grammar:

...and this odd discovery..

I began a fishing article with this sentence: After a desultory morning trolling flatfish and flies with absolutely no results

When I double-checked the meaning of DESULTORY to make sure I was using it properly—much to my surprise, one of the definitions for this seldom-used word is …of a circus rider who leaps from horse to horse…I’m still thinking about that one!

 

Adversity is a great teacher, so there’s nothing like a tight deadline with a National Publication to snap a writer to attention when a re-write is requested of a piece you thought was “in the bag.”

Writes Ontario student Chris Hockley:

Roger,
I have had a number of recent successes that have been incredible.  Amidst
all of this was the first-ever returned piece of writing asking for a
rewrite.  The piece was good... But not good enough for Outdoor Canada.
This has not hurt me in any way and I think that it's a positive that the
time was taken to explain to me what was wrong and why they wouldn't take it
as is.  You read this piece before I sent it to them as did Bill Thompson, Executive Director of Outdoor Writers of Canada.
But who knew that it wasn't going to be what they were looking for...
All the points they made were valid and understandable. In fact I learned
more from the notes in that one article than I have since working on your
course. (Note to Chris—Now THAT’S a great attitude!)
The main point is that the first draft was too slow.  It needed more
excitement and a catchier opening.
The rewrite of this article has been dreadful for me as I don't want to
disappoint the OC guys again...
Would you be able to take the time to go over it and make any necessary
suggestions?  I am supposed to submit this tomorrow.
Many, many thanks in advance, my friend.
I hope to talk to you soon!
Bass wishes,
Chris Hockley
Owner-Blitzcreek Pro Fishing
www.blitzcreek.com

 

A freelancer’s opportunities are everywhere.  Just ask Ontario writer/photographer student Dean Williams:

Good evening, Roger.

 My lesson 10 is in the mail and should be in your hands by Monday. 

 Hope all is well with your family and we wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy Holiday Season from Ontario.  

 I forgot to mention in the package that the local golf course hired me to take some landscape photos for their Christmas card, and they also want me to take some winter shots to enlarge and hang in the lobby of the clubhouse.  

Thank you for your time and I hope to hear from you soon.

 Dean Williams

 Atwood, Ontario

 

Student Elizabeth James in Vancouver B.C. writes with news of her first publication and pay cheque.

Roger,

I received my first cheque from Canadian Organic Gardener.  I am awaiting the tear sheets. I'm working on the blueberry farm article (also for COG). My Glaucoma article is to appear in a Lower Mainland Senior’s publication - small fee but, again, the tear sheets will pad the portfolio. I'm updating the Victoria, B.C., Flower Count article in the hope of getting that published too.

 Cheers,

Liz

Liz also writes: 

While browsing for more magazines and guidelines, I found the following website: http://www.writers.ca/whattopay.htm  It has some useful info for Canadian writers; thought you might be interested.

 Liz.

More Student Publishing Success

From students  Michelle and Jim Wiebe, in the Alberta Rockies:

Hi there, Roger.

 Some good news – if you have a look at ‘Explore’ Magazine – page 25 I think – there is our small, but still our, piece about Cape Breton.

 Cheers,

Michelle & Jim

 

 

As Founder of the North American School of Outdoor Writing, I am always keenly interested to know what students in the school think of the lessons.  Here is a note from New York Graduate student William Lefebvre to a prospective student.  Thanks for your kind words, Billy.

 

Hi David,
I am so glad you wrote.  I would love to share my
experiences with the course with you.  I wrote a story
and had it published well before the end of my course.  It
was a story that was in the back of my mind for years waiting
to be written and published.  Now to answer the questions
you have so far addressed, you will have more than
adequate time with the instructor Roger Brunt, before, during and
even after the course is completed, in fact he has come
to be considered a close friend of mine even though we have
never met.  He was there whenever I needed him even when
I was deployed in the war zone at Baghdad International
airport in Iraq.  I was worried I would not be able to
finish my course, but instead it flourished with and to
include my deployment.  I had two works published that
had nothing really to do with the "outdoors" but rather the
war.  I cannot think of any minuses or deficiencies in
this course other than I wish I would of taken it years ago.
Billy

 

I was pleased to see my article on Censorship entitled MUD ON THE WALL—COMMON SENSE AND A COUPE OF LAWSUITS PREVAIL was published in the newsletter for both Outdoor Writers of Canada and Outdoor Writers of America.  It’s one of those unusual topics that generally don’t get much ink. 

 

Prairie Writers Wanted

TJ Quesnel, publisher of the very successful Ontario Fishing e-zine, (where several students are regular contributors) is planning something similar for  Saskatchewan and Manitoba.  If you would like to write for TJ, contact him at duenorth@sympatico.ca

 

 

National Magazine Awards Submissions

From Outdoor Writers of Canada’s Don Meredith:

The National Magazine Awards Foundation is searching for Canada’s best in magazine journalism, photography, and design from 2006 and we need your help.   We rely on partnerships with associations like Outdoor Writers of Canada to ensure that Canada's writers have the opportunity to submit their work.  We request that you notify your members via email, newsletter, your website and/or other announcements of this year's call for submissions which opens December 1, 2006 and ends January 10, 2007.   The 30th Anniversary Awards Gala will be hosted on June 15, 2007 at the Carlu in Toronto. The submission process, instructions and guidelines, a list of categories, and other relevant information are available on our website at http://www.magazine-awards.com.  Please link to the site with either the attached ad banners or a simple text notification.   We hope you will join us in making our 30th year the most successful yet for Canadian artists.  Kind regards, Barbara Gould, Managing Director
National Magazine Awards Foundation, 416-828-9011

 

Hello Everyone,
OWC Corporate member Ontario Out of Doors magazine (Rogers Media) has sent me the following announcement that Ontario members might find interesting.
Yours in the outdoors,
Bill Thompson
OWC Executive Director

 

From: "Melissa Hammond" <Melissa.Hammond@ood.rogers.com>
Date: Wed, 8 Nov 2006 17:06:39 -0500
To: <outdoorswithbill@rogers.com>
Subject: Ice Fishing Tour Press Release
ICE FISHING SEMINARS PRESS RELEASE forwarded by Bill Thompson, Executive Director of Outdoor Writers of Canada.
Hi Bill,
I have attached press releases for a couple of the upcoming Ice Fishing Tours.  Could you please pass on the press releases to some outdoor writers, it would greatly be appreciated!  
I will send you more press releases as the events get closer.  There is a list of all of the events including the dates and locations on the second page of the press release.

Thank you!
Melissa
<<2006 ICE FISHING TOUR PRESS RELEASE-Orillia.doc>>  <<2006 ICE FISHING TOUR PRESS RELEASE-Ottawa.doc>>
Melissa Hammond
Sales Assistant
Ontario OUT OF DOORS
Phone:  416-764-1646
Fax:      416-764-1751
Email:   melissa.hammond@ood.rogers.com

PRESS RELEASE

For Immediate Release

Thursday, October 26, 2006

Attn: News Department, Community Events/Calendar Editor, Outdoor Editor

ICE FISHING SEMINARS

SATURDAY, NOV. 11, 9 A.M. & 11 A.M.

TROMBLY’S TACKLE BOX

595 WEST ST. SOUTH, ORILLIA

(705) 327-3474

 

Winter is fast approaching, but that doesn’t mean your fishing season has to end.  Ice fishing is one of the fastest growing types of fishing in Ontario.  In fact, Ontario is considered one of the world’s best ice-fishing destinations.  Top hardwater anglers from all over the world come to Ontario during the winter to fish for walleye, pike, trout, whitefish, perch and crappie.

Whether you’re a beginner looking to get started or an experienced hardwater angler, you’ll learn everything you need to know to succeed on the ice this winter at one of the upcoming Mazda Ice Fishing Tour events presented by Ontario OUT OF DOORS magazine. 

The tour will be making a stop at Trombly’s Tackle Box here in Orillia on Saturday, Nov. 11.  Ontario OUT OF DOORS writer and ice fishing pro Wil Wegman will host seminars at 9 a.m. and 11 a.m.  featuring great tips on gear and techniques.  The event also includes hands-on demonstrations, door prizes, and great in-store deals.   Every attendee will receive a free copy of the “Essential Guide to Ice Fishing in Ontario” from Ontario OUT OF DOORS magazine.

The Mazda Ice Fishing Tour is sponsored by Ontario OUT OF DOORS magazine, Lowrance, The Clam, Ice Armor, Fish Trap and the Ontario Federation of Anglers & Hunters.

FOR MORE INFORMATION CONTACT:

Alison de Groot

Ontario OUT OF DOORS

(416) 764-1789

alison.degroot@ood.rogers.com

 

Remi Trombly

Trombly’s Tackle Box

(705) 327-3474

trombly@tromblystacklebox.com

 

Complete Tour Schedule

 

Friday & Saturday, Nov. 3-4

Ramakko’s Outdoor Adventure Store

125 Loach’s Road

Sudbury, ON

(705) 522-8889

Seminary Friday 7p.m. & Saturday 10 a.m

 

Saturday, Nov. 11

Trombly’s Tackle Box

595 West St. South

Orillia, ON

(705) 327-3474

Seminars at 9 a.m. & 11 a.m.

 

Saturday, Nov. 18

JB’s Fishing Depot

24 Ronson Drive

Rexdale, ON

(416) 614-7222

Seminars at 11 a.m. & 2 p.m.

 

Saturday, Nov. 25

Natural Sports

1572 Victoria St. North

Kitchener, ON

(519) 749-1620

Seminars at 11 a.m. & 2 p.m.

 

Sunday, Nov. 26

Grimsby Tackle

515 Main St. West

Grimsby, ON

(905) 945-0399

Seminars at 11 a.m. & 2 p.m.

 

Saturday, Dec. 2

Fishing World Outdoor Centre

2411 Barton St. East

Hamilton, ON

(905) 573-2288

Seminars at 11 a.m. & 2 p.m.

 

Saturday, Dec. 9

Bass Pro Shops

One Bass Pro Mills Drive

Vaughn, ON

(905) 761-4000

Seminars at 11 a.m. & 2 p.m.

 

WANTED: Executive Directory of the Outdoor Writers Association of California

Dear Roger,
Perhaps you have someone in your files who may be interested in
submitting a resume for the position of
Executive Directory of the Outdoor Writers Association of California
(OWAC).  This is a new position in our organization and we are looking for someone who will help us to grow as well as handle the every
day activities of our organization. Presently we have 150 members and
50 supporting members.  Experience in the field of management would help. Outdoor writing is not a prerequisite, but contact in the outdoor field would be a plus.
Please review the document attached and let me know if you can help.
Thank you,
Shirley Miller
Executive Secretary
OWAC
PS:  Should you know of anyone interested in this job, please have them
contact our president, Gary Graham  bajafly@bajafly.com
…And thanks for all your work helping develop new outdoor writers.
Shirley
OWAC Executive Director

 

Job Description

Purpose of the Job:  Establish a part time position to manage and direct the day-to-day affairs of a professional organization of approximately 175 outdoor communicators, supporting members and corporations, and to implement the policies established by its Board of Directors.

The Executive Director shall:

A. Edit and distribute OWAC email updates monthly and oversee the production and distribution of the newsletter, a minimum of four issues per year. 

B. Provide a central office and PO Box and furnish storage for and maintain OWAC records.  Maintain organization’s meeting minutes, policies, membership and financial records to be submitted to Board of Directors for approval.

C. Recruit New Members, supporting and corporate members. Support and assist members, and serve as a liaison among elected (officers?) leaders, committees, and others. Initiate membership renewal notifications for members and supporting members.  Keep president informed about members’ views and problems.

D. Work toward achieving the OWAC strategic plan and mission by developing strong, positive working relationships with members, volunteers, the board, and supporting members. Initiate and maintain communication with OWAC members and leaders to foster an environment of inclusion and fairness in the activities of a diverse membership.

E. Manage public relations for OWAC including maintaining and developing files of tapes, articles, etc., for public relations purposes.  Assist in public relations’ activities.

F. Oversee Volunteer production and content of all association publications, including the monthly email updates, OWAC News; annual directory [print and online]; and various brochures, manuals and handbooks.   Work with volunteer committees to compile and maintain awards information, CA of Year info, elections, etc.

G. Manage all OWAC financial affairs. Be responsible for revenue receipts and expenditures and make timely disposition (as defined by Executive Committee) of all receipts and expenditures. Maintain corporate accounting records according to generally accepted accounting practices and provide financial statements monthly to the President, Finance Committee Chairman, and Auditor. These monthly statements shall include a complete record of OWAC financial activity, including but not limited to, photocopies of bank statements. There shall be no withdrawals from OWAC savings account or no transfer of funds from one account to another without the written approval of the President or Treasurer, which approval shall state the reasons(s) for such withdrawal or transfer. No OWAC account shall be closed or no account shall be opened without the approval of the Executive Committee. Will prepare a semi-annual and annual financial report and present it to the Board of Directors and General Membership as appropriate. The Executive Director shall be bonded for the maximum amount of assets within his (her) authority. Any one expenditure may not exceed $1,000 unless provided for in the budget. The President may authorize expenditures beyond this amount.

H. Coordinate with the Treasurer and Finance Committee; plan the annual budget, explaining assumptions and changes clearly.  Present the budget for board approval. Provide forecasts and analyses of the organization’s programs and fiscal health. Give monthly financial reports to the Executive Committee, quarterly reports to the board and semi-annual reports to the membership. Control expenses to operate within the budget. Suggest ways to boost non-dues revenues and streamline costs. Invest assets consistent with association goals, board directives and bylaws.

I. Must attend all meetings of the Board of Directors with no vote at board meetings. Implement board policies. Alert and counsel leaders when these policies appear to contradict bylaws or past board directives. Assist the President as a key spokesperson for the organization and develop a clear understanding of the outdoor media so the diverse interests of members are fairly represented.

J. Serve on the Conference Site Selection Committee, which is responsible for obtaining and evaluating bids as well as inspecting all possible sites for the annual meeting. Assist with the planning of the annual conference and support the conference program chair. Oversee coordination of the mid­winter board meeting. Oversee negotiations with host facility managers, vendors and corporate members to ensure smooth-running, cost-effective annual conferences and board meet­ings. Under the direction of the chair of the board, prepare an agenda for and attend all scheduled board and OWAC meetings.

K. While the President is the principal supervisor of the Executive Director, annually an evaluation of the Executive Director shall be made by the entire Board of Directors using MBO (Management By Objectives) system. A written summary of that evaluation shall be prepared by the President and shared with the Executive Director. The President and the Executive Director shall initial such a written evaluation confirming that each has seen and reviewed it. Such written summary shall be a permanent record of the performance of the Executive Director. Hire, train and supervise volunteers and outside contractors to serve the needs of the membership.

L. Additional “duties as assigned” may be agreed upon by the President and the Executive Director during the year.

M. Compensation for the Executive Director shall be included in an annual letter of agreement between the Executive Director and the Board of Directors. This letter of agreement shall be adopted by the incoming Board of Directors at their meeting following the general membership meeting at the Annual Conference.

And this, fowarded by Don MacLean of the Writers Federation of Nova Scotia are the following opportunities for writers.

CONTESTS AND MARKETS

Twaddle Magazine:  The Contest:
The best submitted piece with the words Dappled & Snack wins.  Deadline: January 14th.  For submission guidelines, visit: http://www.ryanbird.com/guidelines.html

The Poetic License Contest for Canadian Youth 2007 The League of Canadian Poets invites Canadian youth to participate in its Poetic Licence Contest.  There are two age categories, junior (grades 7-9) and senior (grades 10-12).  For more details and submission guidelines, please visit: www.youngpoets.ca  Deadline:  January 15, 2007.

Pandora’s Collective Poetry Contest

Hibernating with WordsDeadline Jan 15, 2007, Winners announced Feb 1, 2007. For full contest guidelines, please visit: http://www.pandorascollective.com/contest.html

Prism International Prism’s 20th Annual Short Fiction Contest.  Entry deadline:  January 31, 2007.  For all the details, please visit:  http://prism.arts.ubc.ca/

THE ROBERT KROETSCH AWARD FOR INNOVATIVE POETRY
Snare Books is pleased to announce the Robert Kroetsch Award for Innovative Poetry. The prize will be awarded annually to the best poetry manuscript by an emerging Canadian writer (a writer who has published two books or less). Each year the winning manuscript will be selected by an established poet in co-operation with Snare Books. This year's judge is Darren Wershler-Henry. The winner will receive a trade paperback contract with Snare Books which will include the publication of the manuscript and a $500 honourarium. Deadline is January 31, 2007. Each entry must be accompanied with a business size SASE and an entry fee for $30.00 Canadian. Please make all cheques payable to Livres Snare. No cash please. The Robert Kroetsch Award for Innovative Poetry, c/o Snare Books, #1A 4302 St. Urbain Street, Montreal QC, H2W 1V5. For more info: jon.fiorentino@gmail.com.

For an excellent and comprehensive source of information about writing contests and potential markets, may we suggest you visit www.placesforwriters.com.  Barbara Fletcher maintains the site as a free resource to writers.

 

MARKETS

 

Toadlily Press is seeking poetry submissions for its next book.  For details, visit: http://www.toadlilypress.com/sub.htm

 

Call for submissions for the initial issue (February 2007) of the Buenos Aires Literary Review, an English language literary magazine open to all genres based in Buenos Aires, Argentina.  They  require first South American rights to any works and accept reprints, but please inform them where and when the work originally appeared.  Payment is in contributor's copies.  They are looking for Short Fiction (up to 6000 words), poetry and one-act plays.  Submissions should be sent to editorbal@gmail.com .  The website is under construction, but visit them at www.baliterary.com.ar after December 15th.

 

the travel itch is looking for non-fiction stories on international, Canadian and BC travel destinations containing 1500 words.  For full details, please visit: http://www.thetravelitch.ca/guidelines.pdf

 

Misunderstandings magazine

Submission deadline for issue #5 is January 7, 2007.  For submission guidelines for poetry and b & w artwork, visit: http://www.misunderstandingsmagazine.com/Submissions.htm

 

Ascent Magazine

A quarterly journal of yoga and engaged spirituality, publishes personal narratives on particular themes.  Vision is the theme for Summer 2007, deadline:  January 8.  For more details, please visit: http://www.ascentmagazine.com/toc.aspx?issueID=31&page=read&subpage=current

 

Fieldstone

The Fieldstone Review, the online literary journal based at the University of Saskatchewan, is currently accepting submissions (poetry, fiction, creative non- fiction) for its spring 2007 issue. Deadline is January 15, 2007.  Submissions will be paid (amount depends on funding).  For submission information and guidelines go to: http://www.fieldstonereview.usask.ca/submissions.php  (SWG)

 

Women and Work is looking for narrative accounts of how women define work. Submit a one-page prospectus and short bio to Melanie Springer Mock at: mmock@georgefox.eduDeadline:  January 15, 2007.  Email for more details.

 

Writers' Federation of Nova Scotia

www.writers.ns.ca 

902 423 8116

 

Happy Holidays, everyone.  It’s been a wonderful year, very much because of my friendship with all you fellow outdoor writers.

Roger Brunt rbrunt@saltspring.com

The North American School of Outdoor Writing www.nasow.com/

 


Newsletter November 1 2006

The North American School of Outdoor Writing

Salt Spring Island, British Columbia,

Heavy rain—the first of the winter storms sweep in off the Pacific. Brrrrrrrrr!



This is the time of year that the Steller’s Jays come down off the mountains into the lowlands. No wonder! Salt Spring used to be one of B.C.’s premier agricultural areas. Abandoned orchards dot the Island and most people who live on this Paradise Isle have gardens, fruit and nut trees, poultry and livestock. This creates a veritable jay-bird paradise. Steller’s Jays are like blue jays, but darker in colour (slate gray) and a little larger. They are cheeky and noisy; their raucous calls ring out across the hills dotted with flame-coloured oak and maple trees.

Fall on Salt Spring may not be as spectacular as in the maple forests of the eastern seaboard but, this year in particular, it has been a spectacular fall. Flocks of California quail are everywhere, and blacktail bucks sport new racks of ivory-coloured antlers. I feel grateful to live here, and grateful to be able to tell all my writing compatriots a little about this place.



There’s nothing like the thrill of your first publication. Student Joni Pasch in Kendall, Wisconsin writes:

Hi Roger,
I received my Wishigan Outdoors magazines on Monday. My article was the whole back page. I told my 10-year-old grandson to read the part about the paint turtle and he said "Hey, who wrote this"? He read my name and wondered if I had entered a contest. He had to go and read the article to his sister. They thought that was pretty cool. He was the one who wanted the turtle and his sister is the one who threw it back. I'm working on my next article and I hope to get it and my lesson out to you next week.
Joni



If there is anything that comes close to the thrill of that first published piece of writing, it is positive feedback from readers of your published articles. I was thrilled to receive two this month.

The first was a note passed along by Mitch Cox, editor of Fur Fish Game magazine, from John Pearson in Nashville, Tennessee. John read my article in FFG on Coyote Attacks on Humans and wrote:

Mr. Brunt,
I own a wildlife removal company in Nashville, Tennessee and I am constantly receiving calls concerning coyote and human contact. I would like to post your article from Fur Fish and Game about such coyote/human contact on my website www.allpawswildlife.com or post a link to your story. I believe your story has important information the general public doesn't often see in print and it would be a good resource for them. I look forward to your answer.
Best Regards,
John Pearson
Owner: All Paws Wildlife Removal



And this very gratifying note was passed along by Associate Editor Bob Sexton of Outdoor Canada magazine, following publication of a tribute story I wrote about my Dad following his passing away 22 years ago. It took that long to find this story “just the right home.” Dad would be pleased. (My story appears at the end of this newsletter.)

I would like to thank the staff and editors of Outdoor Canada Magazine for publishing the short story Alone Time. On September 29, 2005 the world lost a wonderful man who enjoyed all there was to enjoy outdoors, my grandfather. As an avid hunter and fisherman, once his grandchildren were old enough to wear orange and keep up, they became students. Reading this story I had to stop and check the author as I could swear it was my husband, brother or any of my cousins speaking. To remember, we now wear blaze orange ribbons, and will all have our own Alone Time.

Thank you, Jo-Ann Lichty

Please welcome new student Jessi Lynn Bell, in Terrace, B.C. I spent time in Terrace, even got cornered in a tent by an irate black bear there once. I look forward to working with Jessi and getting to know her through her writing.



Congratulations to Livingston, Texas student Kent Dickens. He has been accepted for student membership in Outdoor Writers Association of America. Smart move, Kent.



Congratulations to Atwood, Ontario student Dean Williams and Port Hawkesbury, Nova Scotia student Damian Lee Welsh. Both have been accepted into Outdoor Writers of Canada as student members. Way to go, guys.



News From Game and Fish Publications

Writers,
Greeting from Marietta, Ga. Thanks for being a part of Game & Fish Magazine.
I have a few things I wanted to pass on to you.
1) We are no longer using our Post Office box. The U.S. Postal Service will
be stamping ³Return to Sender² on mail with the post office box on it sent
to me or anyone else in Marietta.
Note that our new address is the same minus the POB:
John Geiger, editor
Game & Fish Magazine
2250 Newmarket Parkway, Suite 110
Marietta, GA 30067
2) I have assigned all of May 2007 issue. In a few weeks I will assign June.
After that, in general we're heading into mostly hunting coverage with the
July issue. Keep queries coming. Know that I read all queries that are sent
or e-mailed to me, but I cannot always get back to you in a timely manner.
3) There has been confusion over word counts. Please write at least to the
word count for each article. For our production purposes, sidebars WILL BE
included in the word count. Titles, headers, bylines and captions ARE NOT
included. So a 1,300-word story with a 200-word sidebar and 30 words of
title and subtitle has a word count of just 1,500.
4) Jpegs are OK. But please no jpeg compression, or as little as possible.
(If scanning photos or slides, send photos or slides to me as well if
possible. And no compression on the scans.) Set digital cameras to the
HIGHEST QUALITY setting or the LOWEST COMPRESSION setting. Do not use
PhotoShop, PhotoElements or any other program to "enhance" the photos in any
way. If you want to see how big the photo is at 300 ppi/dpi, MAKE SURE
"resampling" is NOT checked in the dialog box. It might be hard to see it,
but "resampling" distorts the photo. if necessary, our production department
will do any color correction and enhancing here. If you take digitals,
there¹s a good article about digital photography, composition, lighting and
settings at www.eastmans.com/tips.php
5) Often I am in need of photos. Could each of you write out what slides and
high-resolution digital images you generally have available? It does not
need to be a catalog, but just a broad brush stroke of types of species you
have available for publication. E.G., John Jones: Oregon elk, rainbows in
high desert, ducks and geese. That kind of thing.
6) If you have any hunting or fishing adventure stories (you know, like
³Hunter Lost in Death Valley Survives Five-Day Walk to Civilization² or
³Angler Lives to Tell About Stream-side Bear Attack² stuff like that. Please
query me because we need stories like that for future issues.
Thanks.
John Geiger, editor
Game & Fish Magazine
2250 Newmarket Pkwy., Suite 110
Marietta, Ga. 30067
(770) 953-9222



New Publication

I see a note in the Market News section of the OWC newsletter that a new publication, Canadian Trophy Hunter, is looking for stories “from across Canada on any hunting activity.” Contact editor Dave Murray at ctha@mts.net



Stories wanted For The Sportsmans Channel

Happy Friday and a Pleasant Fall!

The Sportsman Channel’s January 2007 issue is fast approaching and we are looking for a few good articles. Please see below – remember we accept previously published articles, but all articles must have 2-3 high-res, good quality pictures. Pay is $150 to $350 per article based upon if previously published and quality of pics.

Our 2007 run of The Sportsman Magazine is expanding to 40 pages and 150,000 distribution!!

Ice Fishing tips/techniques: we are open to any ideas you throw at us for this piece.

Conservation piece – again, open to ideas, although we were considering maybe an interview with a DNR agent on what they are doing recently with the CWD campaign. I saw a piece on public TV that they were expanding their resources and going further with the campaign since it has been out for some time now.
Anybody a cartoonist? Send us your ideas/submissions for a regular cartoon strip
Your ideas – this issue will be handed out at our booth at the SHOT Show in Orlando so send us your best ORIGINAL, NEVER PUBLISHED query idea to really make our magazine stand out at SHOT.
Will you be at SHOT? If so, let me know as The Sportsman Channel is opening up a very special segment of their Producer Appreciation Event at the House of Blues on Friday, Jan 12th to outdoor writers! More info to follow, but keep that evening in mind!

Look forward to your submissions,

Best Regards,

Michelle Scheuermann

Director of Communications

The Sportsman Channel

w236 s7050 Big Bend Drive, Suite 6

Big Bend, WI 53103

Ph. 262-662-3800 ext. 11

Fax: 262-662-3890

www.thesportsmanchannel.com

mscheuermann@thesportsmanchannel.com



Milwaukee Writers’ Positions Available:

Also from Michelle, Editor of the Sportsmans Channel magazine writes:

Hi Roger,

If you wouldn’t mind adding in this from me:

The Sportsman Magazine 2007 editorial calendar is now available in rough format. Please e-mail me if you are interested in looking at it to submit ideas/queries. On a side note, we have lots of positions available at our Milwaukee location: specifically Marketing/PR Assistants and Copy Editor. Please send your resumes to me at mscheuermann@thesportsmanchannel.com if you are interested. As always, it has been a great pleasure to work with Roger’s group! Michelle Scheuermann, The Sportsman Channel.



Website Writers Wanted

Hi Roger,

B.C. angling writer Bill Luscombe suggested I contact you and see if any of your students might be interested in participating in a new website I am creating. It has a focus on the Canadian wilderness experience, specifically focusing on B.C. and the Yukon, although information about other outdoor or wilderness areas is welcome. It will be a place where visitors can come for unbiased information from experts in their various fields. It will provide them with a forum where they can discuss their experiences, ask specific questions of the experts, and get any information pertaining to their area of interest.

Your students' role would be to participate by writing articles about the outdoors. The payoff for them is that they will not have any of the financial burden or site maintenance duties other than contributing articles that they choose to write. It will offer them the opportunity to gain exposure. Their bio would be available including their website address if they have one. In other words, they will have significant exposure and free advertising.

Right now, we need a large amount of content to launch the site. If anyone is interested and has articles, they would be welcome. The articles could be about an area of expertise they have in the outdoors, trip reports, how to's, animal information, etc. We have very flexible guidelines.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Dean

Contact: pathways@bowronlakes.com

Web Sites: http://www.bowronlakes.com
http://www.canoe-yukon.com





When I queried Dean to see if there was a chance that writers could look forward to being paid he replied:

Roger,

Thanks for your reply. If we make money over the costs, I would be happy to have writers get paid. One of my hopes is that people who write, eg: experts in kayak, climbing, etc. will win by driving business to their own sites. I am very interested in spreading the financial success around and am not interested in taking advantage of anyone.

Dean



Pay back!

Grande Prairie Graduate Student and regular columnist in Alberta Outdoorsmen magazine Brian Bildson writes:

Roger:

I got your edits. I appreciate your quick turn-arounds. I received a cheque from Fur Fish Game magazine the other day for my marten story. I finished up my sheep story so I'll forward it to you after I have one more go at it. I added up all the revenue I've made since I finished the course and I'm at $6,250 (in two years). Looks like I made a good investment! Moose are in full rut--here's a pic of one from this weekend.

Brian



Correction

Would you mind correcting that I am in Bozeman, rather than Yellowstone, Montana in the next newsletter? Thank you. Otherwise people get mighty confused...

Hobie Hare,

Graduate Student
Photographer and Writer
www.wildharephotos.com


Graduate Student Allen McQuinn—On Vehicle Theft—Listen Up!

Hello Roger,

The October issue is an outstanding newsletter!

I will forward the info about ticks to my vet; she has been using the tweezers method on my (and others) dogs. (As I have as well!)

I really enjoyed reading the closing story. So incredibly well written!

In November I will complete the requirements for my Bachelor of Science in Business Management, and that will also free up more time to dedicate to writing, as I am settling into a routine as bank manager!

A tough lesson was learned the other day ... we had our tow vehicle parked backed up to the garage ready to hook up the boat for a nice venture on the water on a Saturday morning. I came out to hook up the boat and discovered that my failure to lock the car cost us the gift I had bought my lovely wife for Christmas; a very nice Cannon 20D camera and a telephoto lens with five different filters!

I was planning on doing a segment on summer perch, as the destination location was well known for very large, that is 15-inch variety perch. Photos would have made a great contribution to the story.

I wish you nothing but the best, and will send more later.

Allen McQuinn



Photos Available of the Outdoor Writers of Canada Conference from Peter Wood.

Hi Roger;

Great newsletter as usual. But I'm surprised you didn't mention that a lot of the photographs taken (including the one of you and Chris Hockley published in Real Fishing magazine--Fall 2006) and the OWC newsletter Inside/Outdoors were submitted by a graduate of NASOW. Of course, if anyone wants a full resolution photo sent to them contact me at: ripplejournalism@gofishin.ca I would only be too pleased to send one to them.

Peter

Peter Wood also Launches His PODCAST Site

To all hunters and anglers; I invite you all to listen to Ripple Outdoors' latest podcast at http://gofishin.podoptimize.com
Each week a new episode will air online.
Previous aired episodes will be soon be archived at www.gofishin.ca on the "podcast" page. Just click for a free subscription to download this free service. Most episodes will run about 15 minutes in length.
Interviews are with well-known hunters & anglers concerning Ontario's outdoor hot topics, conservation issues, tips, techniques and a chance to get involved.

If you would like to be interviewed to discuss new or old hunting and angling techniques, products or hot topics concerning Ontario's outdoors please email me at ripplepodcast@gofishin.ca Please email me your questions or comments; good or bad. (it's ok I have a delete button).

Peter F. Wood, Ripple Journalism & Images
1-888-396-6251 ripplejournalism@gofishin.ca www.gofishin.ca

From White Fox, Saskatchewan Graduate Student Gerald Peterson reflects on the Writing Life:

Hello Roger;

Thanks for the information on Outdoor Canada magazine's Waypoint section. I will give it a try.

Not much to report at this time. I finally got paid for my story in the trophy hunting magazine, you remember the one where I had give up on ever seeing a cheque.

Outdoor Edge magazine wants to see my article on hitting running game, so I am hoping they like it. The last article that I sold was in the January issue of the Varmint Hunter magazine. You see, I joined the Dept. of Highways last spring, operating equipment, driving truck and working on the general up-keep of the province's highways. I enjoy the job but I must admit that I have had very little time to devote to my writing. Only two short articles all summer! We were working a lot of overtime this summer and not seeing a lot of free time, but the season finishes Oct. 31 and I won't be called back until next April, so I have high hopes for my writing to pick up in the off season- beginning in early November.

I am reminded of the book that you lent me back when I first enrolled in your writing school, called Journal of a Novel, by Stienbeck I believe, where he went on about organizing all of his papers and sharpening all of his pencils, and if I remember correctly, doing most everything but actually sitting down and writing that day. I guess we all have a little procrastination in us that creeps to the surface from time to time.

I hope all is well with you and your outdoor writing school still plays a big part in your life. There are times, like this past summer, where I am not able to find enough time for my writing, and I think maybe my time as a freelance writer is almost finished and maybe I am entering a new chapter in my life. It is during times like this when I take a hard look back at what I have accomplished- the articles that I have wrote, the editors that I have worked with and the publications that I have written for and I realize that I am a very fortunate fellow indeed, that I will continue to find the time to vent my feelings and expressions through my writing and that I could never have done it without your guidance.

Thanks again, Roger.

Sincerely Gerald Peterson





Indiana student Rich Creason writes:

Hi Roger!

All is well here. Last week we were in Alabama at the South East Outdoor Press Association conference. Temperature was up to 92 degrees. Here in Indiana, it is a high of 42 today! SEOPA was interesting. Alabama Tourism who hosted the event was outstanding. I took advantage of the Tourism Showcase they had on Breakout Day. I am in the process of working out trips to at least four different states within the next six or seven months. I learned a few good things to take back to our Association of Great Lakes Outdoor Writers conferences. I also noticed several items that I want to make sure to avoid at our events.

Organization at SEOPA was excellent, people were extremely friendly, ability to handle problems on short notice was very good. Many good points, a few things which could be worked on, but that is true of any conference. A good group will always have mistakes, but learn from them. Overall, I would recommend SEOPA (or AGLOW!) to any writer looking for a quality organization to join.

Heading to South Carolina next month to gather story info and attend a metal detector hunt. In the last month, we attended AGLOW conference in South Dakota, visited a buffalo farm (pre-planning a buffalo hunt?) in Iowa, got some travel info in Grayling, Michigan, and headed south to Alabama. Add it all up and it's enough mileage to drive to British Columbia and back!

Rich.



Kentucky Graduate Student Charles Smick also attended the SEOPA conference:

Hi Roger:

The SEOPA Conference has really gotten me fired up about writing more articles! I've been VERY BURNED OUT from my full-time job.

Because my full-time job is in construction safety, and many areas of construction safety also parallel safety in many outdoor activities, I believe this could become a niche market for me. Since I have a M.S.degree in safety and several professional certifications, that would add credibility to my articles.

Take Care,

Chuck





Student Missy Maenle, on Hobnobbing with the Hoi Poloi in North Dakota

Roger:

I have to tell you about the last three days, but mostly yesterday.

Two of the three days were at Dickinson State University, the final day (when I met the Editor of Scientific American) was in Medora, ND. We went to the town of Medora which is where TR resided for a few years, as well as to the Teddy Roosevelt National Park and the Elkhorn Ranch...which is TR's actual ranch site. Its nothing more than a few foundation stones now, but still an interesting place.

As I said, I went to a Teddy Roosevelt symposium for a credit for college.

The symposium audience and speakers were filled with interesting people and I was thrilled to meet them. I had no idea who anyone really was except the speakers. I'm pretty shy until I get to know someone so it’s hard for me to go up and introduce myself and just start talking. Dinners were great because others would start the conversation and then I would get to meet these incredibly interesting people. Even better still, we took a bus ride to Teddy's Elkhorn Ranch, which was about an hour and 15 minute drive. The man who sat next to me started out by asking if I was a student and then what was my major. When I told him writing with a Journalism major, he got this look on his face, shook my hand and introduced himself as the editor of Scientific American. I was impressed and floored. We talked the entire trip about everything from his background in journalism to deep scientific stuff. He did the most incredible thing. ...he gave me ideas for stories to write about the symposium and about the oil fights in the area. Told me angles that would make even National Geographic interested. I doubt I'll ever be able to write the sort of story that will fit Scientific America...but it didn't matter to him. I feel like I have an ally in the publishing world and plan to keep an eye out for when he moves to another publication, because he said that in that type of work its always good to move around from time to time. He also told me not to give up on science just because of the math. A physicist from Massachusetts who I met at dinner the night before told me I would make a wonderful contribution to the science community because I would bring a new perspective...it wouldn't be math or science based, but rather based on love of nature.

I got more out of that symposium than I ever expected. What a weekend!

Missy

PS. I should be working on the story for the 4th lesson very soon, because the assignment fits very well with the story ideas Mark gave me.



Beaten by an 11-year-old!

North Vancouver student and frequent contributor to this newsletter Elizabeth James writes:

Roger;

Boo-hoo – It’s not fair! My 11-year-old granddaughter, published before me. She has a story on page 12 of The Magic Bookshop - A book for young writers of Canada.

Lizzie.



There is a very close link between Travel Writing and Outdoor Writing. Here are two letters from writing friends who are members of the Society of American Travel Writers. As you can see from their letters, this is the BIG TIME when it comes to writing and travel opportunities.

First, a letter from fellow writers Dave Wei and Suzanne Clouthier in Vancouver, B.C.:

Hi Roger,
Just wanted to thank you again for getting us into Salmon and
Steelhead Journal. Felt a bit like old home week with BC Sport Fishing
alumni like Dave Vedder and John Beath popping up in the latest
magazine. While we were able to do our profile on Farewell Harbour from
our files, we had a bit more of a panicky time with Sonora Resort.
(Thanks to you, the editor also has asked if we could come up with some steelheading
in BC articles, not really our forte, but it would be a chance to get
into another magazine.)
Our original plan was to go to Sonora Resort on Sept. 12 to14 and to the
West Coast Fishing Clubhouse on Langara Island in the Queen Charlotte Islands on Sept. 3 to 6. All Hell broke loose
About 10 days before our QCI trip when WCFC realized that, although we
were scheduled, someone hadn't counted correctly and they were
overbooked....and being writers (on a comp), asked if could we change
our plans. As it worked out, the only free dates at Sonora before the Salmon and Steelhead Journal’s deadline were Sept. 3 to 5, and the only free remaining dates
at the Clubhouse were Sept. 13 to 17 (the last trip of the season). Wheeew!
Our trips worked out even better than expected. Sonora had room in
their brand new helicopter, so we flew there and back in grand style, as
well as spending two glorious sunny days in the THE luxury resort of BC.
We even caught fish, went on a nature tour and run through the Aaran
Rapids, and finished with massages in their new Wellness Centre a half
hour before flying home...oh, we ate and drank far too much!
Our trip to the Clubhouse worked out fabulously too. For our
trouble, we got a five-day trip instead of a four-day. The grey skies
completely cleared for the first time all season, and we had four full
days of glorious sunshine (albeit windy!!!!!). As we were under no
pressure to catch fish (we were doing a Catch-and-Release trip), we
didn't need to fish our brains out but we still managed to do as well as
some of the guided boats. By spending less time fishing, we were able to
visit Pillar Rock when the light was best for photos, have a guided tour
of the abandoned native village of Kiusta (fascinating), and spent an
afternoon on a surfing beach that would put Long Beach to shame (at
Lepas Bay on the north-west corner of Graham Island). We came home with
four halibut that we caught (can only keep halibut on the C&R program),
and received another big box of one-pound packages of commercially
caught chinook, halibut, and even two Dungeness crabs for being on the
C&R program when we arrived in Vancouver....much easier than trying to
fit some monster chinook into our seven-cubic foot freezer.
Sometimes it pays to be flexible....
Next Thursday morning, we and Pat Taylor are off to Chile. Pat is
taking a pre-tour to the Atacama Desert, while Suzanne and I are off to
Easter Island. We will then meet back in Santiago on Oct. 18 for the
main Society of American Travel Writers Convention. I think we will all be together for a day trip to a big ranch, and probably have some meals together on the Dining Around
evenings and banquet nights. It will be nice to spend some time with Pat.
We have had a tremendously busy late summer and early fall. In
mid-August, my nephew asked if I would do some of the unofficial
photography (200 digitals) at his wedding at the same time as a tackle
manufacturer wanted me to photograph his latest tackle line-up for
advertising brochures (another 150 digitals). A day or two later, we got
an assignment to write about saltwater fishing around Vancouver,
followed by OP Publsihing asking us to revise and rewrite the 18,000 words we had
done for the 2006 Fishing Adventures to around 20,000 words in the 2007
version (which we have just finished). Then we had all the scheduling
problems with our last two writing trips. Editor Bob Jones is hounding me for
eight articles or more for Island Fisherman next year. AAAARgh, maybe I
should have continued teaching. Oh yeah, the Canadian Chapter of SATW is
going to Egypt in January......And I am doing research on digital SLRs
to replace the two 35 mm SLRs that I ruined when my canoe rolled on our
Atlin tour.......But, I'm not complaining!
Cheers and have a happy Thanksgiving,

David Y. Wei and Suzanne L. Clouthier
mailto:sclou@uniserve.com





And this information from Pat Taylor, also a member of SATW. Pat’s husband, Rikk (now deceased) was Founder of B.C. Sportfishing magazine—Rikk was my major mentor.)

Hi Roger,

Always enjoy your newsletter. Might use a few tips on bugs! Along with Dave Wei and Suzanne we are heading to Chile, South America on the SATW convention... Headquarters is Sanitago mid October. They got a nice side-trip to the Easter Islands.. Since I am now in the Senior category will be going up north to the desert area---good trip as in the area of the Inca's. Rikk and I always liked that historic area.

As a Senior wanting a single room: my core convention price including airfare, most meals and hotel was$l,280 US for Santiago. Day trips and half-day trips are included depending how soon you sign up. My pre-trip of 3 days to Northern Chile to the Atacama Desert was $870 ---again including airfare but might have to buy a few lunches as the lodge I am staying at does not have a restaurant. Suzanne and Dave were lucky to get their pre-trip to Easter Island as Dave is an active member.

Dave as an active paid $930US for himself and $l,350 for Suzanne as spouse for the core convention. The Easter Island trip cost $880 per person. The host country usually treats us royally with plenty of guides and photo trips for professionals that want a special story. Some times there are a few glitzes---but that always happens on any travel trip these days Just takes patience, which unfortunately some people don't have. Always a few prima donas!

Membership, I think is $300 annually. You must be sponsored by an active, like Dave and I could so-sponsor you.

Sign up is in March for review ---think Dave could give you the latest info as he was thinking of Suzanne joining since they work together. However, SATW has strict rules, he could let you know.

Cheers,

Pat



Grammar Grappler

Following the last newsletter’s discussion of the use of WHO vs THAT, fellow outdoor writer Ken Kieser writes:

Hey Rog,

Editor (of Wishigan Outdoors) Gary Martin is dead on. I edit papers in my writing seminars from "gifted" college students who apparently never heard of active or passive voice. I can assure you that all editors are well aware of this proper and improper form of writing.

Your readers should read at least three issues of targeted publications before submitting copy. Beginning writers often want to provide editors with a brilliant style that will redefine an already successful format. That may have happened in 1940 "B" movies, not in real life. Editors have a format they must abide by. I hope all students and beginning writers will pay close attention to what Mr. Martin wrote. A copy of Strunk and White's "Elements of Style" is a good purchase for any writer--even the most experienced. I certainly have a copy after 25 years of pounding out stories.

Best,

Kenny Kieser



Here is my article that was published in the Waypoint section of Outdoor Canada magazine in the Oct./Nov. 2006 issue: I hope you enjoy it. Dad would be pleased that so many outdoorsmen are reading about him now, 22 years after he passed away. It is my pleasure to share this with you. And it goes to show, NEVER give up on getting a piece published. This one took more than 22 years to find the right spot for it!